Feedback, edits and final product

From the audience Feedback I can see that, although there was a few anomalies, the demographic found the documentary engaging and made them feel prouder of where they live. I could go into detail about how this means that I have engaged the target audience and how it has made the brief. However, due to past experiences I understand that it is not the positives I need to focus on, but rather all of the negatives. The negatives are not to be seen as hate for the film. But things that other people think of. Since I have made this Documentary by myself, there is no other minds or input on the film. The film may look great to me and others, but in order to engage everyone, I must focus of the negatives that were highlighted. From the feedback I can see that the demographic still want more evidence of my findings and conclusions. This may also be due to the fact that they want to be constantly consuming information, as seen in my Tik Tok research. They also wish to see the ...